Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 08, 19101 at 15:02:42:
In Reply to: Some famous athletes and entertainers earn millions of dollars every year. posted by Yu Gin on August 30, 19101 at 02:41:57:
You had a very interesting perspective on the subject.
Reread your essay and try to correct a few errors in usage.
Some suggestions:
"In my case, especially, I really love baseball game. " try: "... I really love the game of baseball."
" in terms of his hard working and efforts he has poured so far." try:
"in terms of his hard work and the efforts he has made so far."