Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 08, 19101 at 15:08:20:
In Reply to: just in dent my essay again... posted by chareon on August 26, 19101 at 09:34:42:
The indents did not come through, but don't worry. It is a computer/Internet compatibility problem.
Your essay was very entertaining. I like your comparison of students to small capacity batteries. Be careful of capital letters. Only proper nouns and first words in the sentence are capitalized.
Some of your sentences are too complex:
That’s why One long vacation means long times students must be in stress but several short vacations mean several times they relax.
"If students have only one long vacation, it increases the length of time they are under stress. However, if students have several short vacations, they can relax more frequently."