Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 18, 19101 at 19:20:43:
In Reply to: A friend of yours has received some money and plans to use all of it either to go on vacation, or to buy a car. Your friend has asked you for advice. Compare your friend’s two choices and explain which one should your friend choose. Use specific reasons and details to support your choice. posted by Galin Kirev on September 16, 19101 at 04:21:13:
I liked the way you summarized your point of view in the last paragraph.
There are a few awkward expressions:
"traveling with trains to country business is often a great loss of hours."
"travelling by train to the country on business is often a waste of time."
"is the stiff and straight seats that offer no relaxation for the tired body of my friend in the evenings."
"are the stiff and straight-backed seats that do not allow my friend's tired body to relax in the evenings."