Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 18, 19101 at 19:27:09:
In Reply to: ¹177 posted by bobby latchezarov on September 14, 19101 at 17:52:45:
You write very well. You have a good command of parallel structures.
Some suggestions:
My fellow can push the boat out"
" My friend could take his boat out..."
'feelings which will remain inside him"
"feelings which he will remember..."