Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 24, 19101 at 17:22:02:
In Reply to: What is your... posted by Julie on September 24, 19101 at 02:45:08:
You talked about one reason for being in this room: prayer. The essay would be richer if you gave information about the appearance as well as the purpose of the room.
Be careful of long sentences.
"distanced from downtown and has..."
" some distance from downtown. My home has..."
"as a praying place according to personal and family member¡¯s desires. "
" as a place to pray whenever we need."