Move your summary to the introduction


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Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 04, 19101 at 11:20:16:

In Reply to: #20 It is better for children to grow up in the coutryside than in a big city. Dou you agree or disagree? posted by Cindy Steward on October 04, 19101 at 06:01:47:

Tell us at the start what your focus is:
good education, variety of social contacts, and improved global outlook.


Now take these good ideas and develop them as you did.

You have a very large vocabulary. On the TOEFL essay, it is safer to use words that you know are idiomatically correct.




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