Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 26, 19101 at 18:18:59:
In Reply to: Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library posted by Suntichai on October 26, 19101 at 13:14:17:
I understand your opinion and you expressed yourself well. You should reread your essay to correct the few errors that you made in grammar.
I also suggest that you look again at your second paragraph. Can you break this paragraph into smaller ideas with supporting details. It might be more interesting.