Posted by Lin Lougheed on May 02, 19101 at 17:57:09:
In Reply to: 155 posted by Masayuki on April 29, 19101 at 00:09:18:
: In your book, Topic 155 is categorized as "Making an Argument." But I thing it is a "Stating a Preference question and I compare a house and a business. Does this fail to address the question correctly?
These categories are guides. You chose to organize your essay as "stating a preference" and you did an excellent job. Your preferences were clearly stated and you followed with specific details.
A few suggestions:
"love to my girlfriend, my parents, and my friends"
"my love for my..."
"Finally, business might"
"Finally, a business might"