Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 18, 19102 at 17:13:07:
In Reply to: Do you agree of disagree with the following statement? Watching television is bad for children. posted by Piyada Suwanpinij on December 15, 19101 at 10:48:26:
You expressed your ideas very clearly. You made a few grammar mistakes, mostly with subject-verb agreement.
It causes some health problems and also detract them
DETRACTS
: Watching television, especially watching it too closely, certainly bring about myopia in children.
BRINGS
when time pass by
AS TIME PASSES BY
: Another health problem is that when children are addicted to NIGHTTIME TV programS, they will lack of sleep [NOT GET SUFFICIENT SLEEP] and cannot study efficiently.