Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 18, 19102 at 17:19:34:
In Reply to: Mohamad Ali Kelay posted by Mohamad Yahyayi on December 11, 19101 at 16:48:22:
I enjoyed reading your essay of Muhammed Ali, Cassius Clay.
Your sentences are generally well put together. I would rewrite your essay and try to correct your mistakes yourself.
See my next message for specific comments.