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Posted by Lin Lougheed on January 18, 19102 at 17:23:47:

In Reply to: Mohamad Ali Kelay posted by Mohamad Yahyayi on December 11, 19101 at 16:48:22:

I want to write about one of the my favorite character.
WE KNOW YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE ABOUT HIM. DON'T START "I WANT TO WRITE ABOUT..."

he is Kasious Marselos Keley.
MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IS CASSIUS M. CLAY. CLAY WAS A GREAT BOXER. HE WAS BORN IN KENTUCKY TO MIDDLE CLASS PARENTS. HIS FATHER WAS A HOUSE PAINTER. HIS MOTHER WAS A WAITRESS.

: It was in school when Keley started boxing.

CLAY STARTED BOXING WHEN HE WAS 12 YEARS OLD.
he was 12 years old.

LITTLE BY LITTLE, HE WAS SUCCESSFUL AND AT 18 REPRESENTED THE US AT THE ROME OLYMPICS. HE WON A GOLD MEDAL.

he earned success little by little.he went to Rome for Olympic when he was 18.he was US's representative in middleweight and he won gold medal.

THE REST IS UP TO YOU.

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: I want to write about one of the my favorite character. : WE KNOW YOU ARE GOING TO WRITE ABOUT HIM. DON'T START "I WANT TO WRITE ABOUT..." : he is Kasious Marselos Keley. : MY FAVORITE CHARACTER IS CASSIUS M. CLAY. CLAY WAS A GREAT BOXER. HE WAS BORN IN KENTUCKY TO MIDDLE CLASS PARENTS. HIS FATHER WAS A HOUSE PAINTER. HIS MOTHER WAS A WAITRESS. : : It was in school when Keley started boxing. : CLAY STARTED BOXING WHEN HE WAS 12 YEARS OLD. : he was 12 years old. : LITTLE BY LITTLE, HE WAS SUCCESSFUL AND AT 18 REPRESENTED THE US AT THE ROME OLYMPICS. HE WON A GOLD MEDAL. : he earned success little by little.he went to Rome for Olympic when he was 18.he was US's representative in middleweight and he won gold medal. : THE REST IS UP TO YOU.

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