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Posted by xixi on March 24, 19102 at 04:08:57:

In Reply to: You have the opportunity to visit a foreign country for two weeks.Which country would you like to visit? Use specific reasons and details to explain your choice. posted by Wayne JIN on March 10, 19102 at 14:09:07:

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: There are more than one hundred countries, and all of them have different lures to me. But if I have a chance to visit a country for two weeks, I will definitely choose the Unite State of America. The reasons are listed below.

: America is the biggest developed country in the world. She owns a lot of most advanced technology. I do not expect I can learn these new technologies in only two weeks, but at least, I can know why American master so many new technology by taking a survey.
: If I can take this secret back to my homeland, it will do great help to my society.

: America society is a one with multiple human races immigrating from all of the world. They bring different cultures and religions. How they affect each other and combine into a whole one to go on really interests me. I will spent some time to learn how different people are living in this big country, and to learn how their feelings.

: Besides various social cultures, America also has a lot of kinds of geographical scenes. National yellow Stone Park, great canyon, western wild field, Niagara fall etc. All these great natural wonders will definitely impress me so much. I can record them by my digital camera. When I come back to my home, my family and my friends will sure be jealous of my wonderful visit experience.

: From the convenient media, I can learn a lot of information about United States, but I never have chance to visit her. I am sure I will find more valuable experience when my dream comes true someday.

my comments:the United States of America ---the Unite State of America
these new technics---these new technologies



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