Posted by Michele Peters on April 26, 19102 at 15:05:33:
In Reply to: Comparing between scientists and artists in my society, which is more important? posted by Jay on April 17, 19102 at 05:39:36:
You definitely got the idea. Just need to work on the grammar now.
Some comments:
a society can not be existed
a society cannot exist
Each of them is
Every person is
virtually essential is a contradiction; just say essential
an essential role more than artists do
play a more essential role than artists do
Doubtlessly
Undoubtedly
Re-read your essay or ask a friend to read it and see if you can find the other errors. Also, check for misspelled words too.