Posted by Michele Peters on April 28, 19102 at 17:28:45:
In Reply to: Topic 2 posted by Gary_Huang on April 13, 19102 at 11:27:26:
Good start.
You need a third general idea with supporting reasons and need to work on your conclusion. Your conclusion should restate the topic and your three general ideas.
Be sure you use plural verbs for plural subjects and singular verbs for singular subjects.
Some other suggestions:
some knowledge that what
some knowledge about what
he could show patient (who he?) Because you are talking about a few different people: teacher, parent, children, it would be clearer if you say "the teacher" again here instead of "he".
patience
several years
Child's knowledge from
A child's
So parents is the best teacher.
parents (plural) are (plural)