Posted by Michele Peters on April 28, 19102 at 18:35:45:
In Reply to: In general,people are living longer now.Discuss the causes of this phenomenon.Use specific reasons and details to develop your essay. posted by VeniRajamohanReddy on April 04, 19102 at 12:21:58:
Good job.
To make the essay clearer, put spaces between each paragraph. You should have a separate paragraph for your introduction, each of your three reasons with supporting details, and your conclusion. Your conclusion should restate your general ideas like your introduction did.
Now a day
Nowadays
There are mainly some reasons
mainly some is redundant; the main reasons are
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several times a week is also helping