Posted by Lin Lougheed on May 06, 19102 at 06:09:13:
In Reply to: Do you agree or disagree with following statement? only people who earn a lot of money are success. posted by Jacqueline on May 04, 19102 at 19:07:54:
You have a very large vocabulary and, on the whole, use it correctly. You are at the point in your writing where you must begin to pay close attention to the writing styles of native speakers.
There are many small errors that are idiomatic. They do not interfere with communication, but they mark you as a non-native speaker.
First sentence: "What criteria are used to measure success? Different people with a different view of life will of course come up with a different point of view."
here = hear
last paragraph: ".. even stupid to some degree, to consider someone's financial status..."