Posted by Michele Peters on May 12, 19102 at 10:13:34:
In Reply to: no.11 posted by Jack on May 09, 19102 at 13:54:04:
Your essay is well organized and well thought out.
Some comments:
student's sport activities and
students' (plural since you're taking about serveral students)
different for 3 main reasons.
spell out 3 (three)
: Secondly, sports always teach whoever participate in it about the spirit and forgiveness among the players.
Sports teach the players spirit and forgiveness.