Posted by Michele Peters on May 12, 19102 at 10:22:36:
In Reply to: 115-Some people prefer to plan activities for their free time very carefully. Others choose not to make any plans at all for their free time. Compare the benefits of planning free-time activities with the benefits of not making plans. Which do you prefer- planning or not planning for your leisure time? Use specific reasons and examples to explain your choice. posted by Gary_Huang on May 11, 19102 at 01:32:12:
Good start.
Put a space between each paragraph/idea to make your essay more clear.
Some comments:
: Now, there are more and more free time to enjoy people.
Now there is more...
They can arrange their things which they like as their mind.
They can arrange things they like to do.
I think they have some advantages.
Restate your opinion. I think there are advantages to planning.
:hiking in the mountain in the weekend,
..mountains...
It needs to be ready for all foods
"It" =hikers
Also it needs some knowledge for
"It" = hikers
It can relieve people's nerver. This
"It" = Planning
Whenever or however these things are done, it completely depends on people moods.
No "it" is needed