Posted by Michele Peters on May 12, 19102 at 10:34:33:
In Reply to: Do you agree or disagree the following statement? It is necessary to tell a polite lie to avoid hurting someone's feeling? posted by Tina on May 11, 19102 at 20:20:05:
You are off to a good start. Your essay would be clearer if you put a space between each paragraph and clearly state your three main ideas.
Restate the topic in your first paragraph.
Make your three points and provide examples as you did.
Remember to proofread your essay.
Good luck.