Posted by Michele Peters on May 25, 19102 at 15:31:12:
In Reply to: Topic 151 posted by Hiro on May 24, 19102 at 13:05:04:
Your essay is well structured and thought out.
Some suggestions:
because natural land would provide us with some merits but direct economic promotion.
with some benefits other than economic...
even walking in forest can make people (need a verb) at home and provide relief.
feel at home
forest in mountain
a forest in the mountains
not only benefits but also side effects.
not only benefits but also to side effects.
solve such the problem
such problems
Restate your reasons in your conclusion.