Well structured and thought out


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Posted by Michele Peters on May 25, 19102 at 15:42:53:

In Reply to: please comment posted by Kung on May 22, 19102 at 02:34:19:

Great job.

Some comments:

information and gain them more
and gain more

due to the following reasons.
for the following reasons.

computer software in learning
to learn

which those lessen time
which lessen the time

use mailbox to keep temporary
use a mailbox

Third, students can use
e-mail to search abstracts (do you mean the internet?)

and articles in the topic they interest.
...on topics of interest.

In stead of searching
Instead

must purchase
must be purchased

searching from electronic search lessen students time and money.
electronically searching for these materials takes less time and money.

computer technology help
...helps

students learn more information and obtain them more quickly and save students’ money, as well.
students learn more, get information more quickly, and save money.




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