So many grammer mistakes in your essay and the examples are not supportive enough for your key sentences.


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Posted by realturtle on June 01, 19102 at 06:27:14:

In Reply to: Please correct posted by Snow on May 31, 19102 at 16:17:45:

: People remember special gift or present they received. Explain why

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: In our life, we may go through many things. It is very hard to remember exactly what happened, but if something is very special to you, you will remember it forever. For example, if you receive a special gift from you family or a friend, you will not forget what has happened to you, because this gift is very precious and meaningful to you.

: Special gift often means good family relations or precious friendship. For example, if you receive something special from your friend on your birthday, you will be very happy not only because of the gift you receive but also because of the friendship you have.Now that your friends still remember your birthday date, you can imagine how they cherish the relationship with you and how important you are in their life. Special gifts also have special meanings. For example, after many years of hard work, you finally graduate and get the degree. At the same time, you will receive a gift from you parent. The gift represents how much efforts and time spent working on your degree. When you look at the gift in the future, you still remember that there are sadness and happiness, there are rain and sunshine, how many nights you spent working for your exam. The gifts have so many to tell.

: In general, special gift are always related to the person who send them to you or the events that have happened to you. The old saying says: like bird , like her cage.So a memerized gift has many sweet dreams on it.




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