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Posted by kung on June 04, 19102 at 05:54:16:

In Reply to: pls comment posted by kung on June 03, 19102 at 06:34:52:

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: Some people think there is more need for land to be left in natural condition while others think there is more need for land to be developed for housing and industry. The ratios of land left natural and of land developed in any proposes should be suitable for both the need of our country and the demand of people. Leaving the land green, we not only have the origin of natural water supplies but also the protection of flood and dry. Furthermore, providing land and properties is important ,too. In case of my country, Government should survey all land left natural and all land used for housing and industry in all the country and in each city. And then survey both the quantities needed for all country people and those needed for each city . After that they should have both country plan and city plan about how to use all land to gain the country income, to keep the land natural and to serve the need for housing and industry. To conclude, the more efficient and effective the country and the city plan, the more maintain all need. We cannot choose only one aim, but we should concern both country need and people need ,also both short-term and long- term need.

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Some people think there is more need for land to be left in natural condition while others think there is more need for land to be developed for housing and industry. In my opinion,we cannot choose only the first way or the second way,but we would rather balance both alternatives in the suitable ratio for the following reasons.
First,If we leave all lands green,we will maintain the origin of natural water supplies,protect country from flood and drought,and also make people have better health. On the otherhand,we have not enough land for agricultural,
manufacturing and housing purposes,which are important for both our country and the individual.
Second,if we develop all the lands,we have properties and also use those in other purposes gaining income.
Yet,our metal health may poor and if those do not develop properly with the need of all country and each city,we will lose our resources by this unsuitable plan.
From the reasons above,Government should find out the ratio of lands left natural and lands developed both in all over the country and in each city. Then survey both the quantities needed for all country people and those needed for each city . After that they should have both country plan and city plan about how to use all land to gain the country income, to keep the land natural and to serve the need for housing and industry.
To conclude, the more efficient and effective the country and the city plan, the more maintain all need. We cannot choose only one aim, but we should concern both country need and people need ,also both short-term and long- term need.




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