Posted by kung on June 12, 19102 at 05:40:50:
In Reply to: 63.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Most experiences in our lives that seemed difficult at the time become valuable lessons for the future. Use reasons and specific examples to support our answer. posted by xie on June 06, 19102 at 01:50:43:
: During their lifetime, people, male or female, children or adults, have many different kinds of experience that make them happy, jealous, curious, or admiring. As for the statement that those experiences gained from hardship will be invaluable later, I strongly agree with it mainly because these experiences are always helpful, referable, and encouraging.
: First of all, similar to caution lights indicating direction, these experiences help people not fall into the same trap. Since the feeling of anxiety during the hard time and sometimes the feeling of regret of failure impress them deeply, people will be very watchful when they are in similar situations. People, thus, will not make same mistakes and furthest avoid same failures. The fact that being defeated by a weaker rival teaches athletes not neglecting any rival no matter how strong he is can illustrate this very well.
: Secondly, some strategies used before could be effectively applied again. Those strategies, which came up at the hard time, are surely of a great deal of wisdom and endeavor, of people themselves, others or both. They, to some extent, have great value of reference for the later life since they have already been proved effective in the past. A good example can be found in the story that many scientists achieve their successes based on their own or predecessors~{!/~} numerous failed experiments.
: Finally, successes in overcoming difficulties give people courage. The sense of accomplishment makes people more self-confident, that is to say, they firmly believe their ability to solve problems. As a result, they will exert themselves to be up against with all the difficulties instead of escaping or being depressed, even despaired. For instance, experiences of beating stronger opponents undoubtedly enable people to be more confident in any challenge.
: For the reasons mentioned above, I totally agree with the statement. Consequently, not only should we cherish these experiences, but also we should learn effectively abstracting beneficial lessons for our future better lives.
some comments
first,
During their lifetime, people, male or female, children or adults, have many different kinds of experience that make them happy, jealous, curious, or admiring.
the word "admiring" should be admired or not.
second,
Those strategies, which came up at the hard time, are surely of a great deal of wisdom and endeavor, of people themselves, others or both.
This sentence is rather hard to understand.
Third,
Strong structure and full of vocab.I think you certainly get high score of writing. Right?
Kung