Posted by Michele Peters on June 16, 19102 at 11:51:04:
In Reply to: pls comment posted by kung on June 05, 19102 at 02:51:06:
I am sure your mom would be happy to hear you would take her photo with you.
Your essay needs more supporting details. Be sure to give three general statements; each general statement is a topic sentence. Each paragraph will need some supporting details. In your conclusion restate your three reasons. Indent the start of each paragraph and put a space between each paragraph.
Some other comments:
Supposed,I plan to study MBA at
Suppose I plan to study for an MBA
if I can take one addition thing,I like
if I could take one additional thing, I would take my mother's picture with me..
Sometimes I may have problems to adapt myself in the new environment so
...problems adapting to the new environment...
getting her photo in my pocket will
having her photo...
she take care me for a long time
she has taken care of me....
and now she give me a chance to study ...she has given me...
mother picture
mother's picture