Posted by Michele Peters on June 16, 19102 at 12:42:32:
In Reply to: Realistic or Ramantic posted by Snow on June 06, 19102 at 11:48:34:
Your essay would be stronger if you gave a few more supporting details under each general statement. You give an example of being romantic but not many sypporting details for why being romantic is better than being realistic. Your conclusion should restate your three reasons.
: Which kind of life you would like to choose: realistic or romantic one? Many people think that in order to live a better life, one should be more realistic. As far as I am concerned, to live a better life, one should be romantic, because being romantic will give you a great pleasure to enjoy life.
The rose means that how love and care your boyfriend has for you. You can
The rose shows how much your boyfriend loves and cares for you.
that the life is so beautiful not
that life is ...
but happiness of the life.
but because of the happiness it brings (?)
argue that we have not so much money, how we could be romantic.
...if we do not have much money we cannot be romantic.
gift to your boyfriend,
for your
: Finally, it is easy to settle down for everything if you are romantic.
For instance, you have ice with your boyfriend.
ice = fight (?)
The best way to solve is to have a dinner with your boyfriend at candled light.
...resolve the fight is to have a candle light dinner with you your boyfriend.
In such romantic atmosphere, both of you will forget unpleasant thing and get along with well again.
..the unpleasant things and get along well with each other again.
: In conclusion, romance is not only in the relationship with your boyfriend, but also in your family member, your friend, your colleague and your boss.
You do not mention these other people in your eassy. Your conclusion should reated the points you make in the eassy.