Posted by Sudeshna Aich on July 24, 19101 at 14:20:12:
Dear Mr. Lougheed,
First of all I must thank you for your book about the TOEFL Essay. Even though I came to know about your book a bit too late (because I am taking my TOEFL on 10th Aug'01 and I got this book only one week back) but I still believe that by going through this book and practicing in the same way I am actually improving my skill of writing an essay.
Topic #1 is the first essay that I have posted here. I would be really grateful if you could give your valuable comments on my writing ability and your advise for the same.
Hope to get your comment and advise before my exam.
Thank you
Regards
Sudeshna
sudeshna_aich@hotmail.com