Posted by To Thuy Linh on July 24, 19102 at 05:54:13:
In Reply to: ĦiTopic13ĦjSome people prefer to eat at food stands or restaurants. Other people prefer to prepare and eat food at home. Which do you prefer? Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. posted by Naluwan on July 20, 19102 at 22:01:10:
There is no problem with your point of view. But there are some with the structures and words.
For example:
start to cook -> start cooking
but it's worthy to be done -> but it's worth it / but it's worthy of doing such a thing
without less poison -> without poison / less poison
like to enjoy -> enjoy (they are the same???)
This is just my thinking.
Anyway, I think your essay is a good one.