Throw away your first paragraph

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Posted by Lin Lougheed on July 25, 19102 at 20:22:45:

In Reply to: Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Grades (marks) encourage students to learn. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion posted by li li on July 24, 19102 at 05:42:47:

Many writers throw away their first paragraph when they have finished an essay. Your conclusion covers what you wrote about. Use these ideas to make a new introductory paragraph.

Your next paragraphs covering your three points are very well organized. You give good examples.

Now, you must review your own work and focus on the structure.

Look at the CAPS below.

Many of the world’s religions share a belief that GRADES MAKE students WORK hard. Moreover when students try to get a good GRADE, they MAY decide TO PAY MORE ATTENTION TO THE COURSE. I agree with the above statement (WHICH STATEMENT?) because I believe that GOOD grades (OR HIGH MARKS) are A
useful aid to A bright future.

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: Many writers throw away their first paragraph when they have finished an essay. Your conclusion covers what you wrote about. Use these ideas to make a new introductory paragraph. : Your next paragraphs covering your three points are very well organized. You give good examples. : Now, you must review your own work and focus on the structure. : Look at the CAPS below. : : Many of the world’s religions share a belief that GRADES MAKE students WORK hard. Moreover when students try to get a good GRADE, they MAY decide TO PAY MORE ATTENTION TO THE COURSE. I agree with the above statement (WHICH STATEMENT?) because I believe that GOOD grades (OR HIGH MARKS) are A : useful aid to A bright future.

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