the forth paragraph, omit or not?


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Posted by To Thuy Linh on July 26, 19102 at 06:00:43:

In Reply to: Well-thought out organization posted by Lin Lougheed on July 25, 19102 at 19:57:29:

My friend told me that my forth paragraph must be omitted because it doesn't support my point of view. Is that right??? I don't think so. But what is your opinion?



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