Posted by Michele Peters on August 11, 19102 at 12:38:20:
In Reply to: 81.Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Technology has made the world a better place to live. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion. posted by cute boy on August 05, 19102 at 20:09:20:
Your essay is good. You also acknowledge and address arguments to your position which stregnthens your essay.
Some other comments:
Introduce your examples in your introduction. Technology has made life better because of x, y, and z.
Not only do we use aircondition and heating system during the summer and winter, but also do we take many changes in food preparation methods to make so delicious food.
...use airconditioing in the summer...and heating systems in the winter, but we also use techology to prepare delicious foods. Give an example. And since you are talking about comfort, your example should show food preparation technology making life more comfortable.
: The last but not the least,
Last but not least,
people begin to realize the fact that
...have begun to realize the importance a healthy enviromment has to continued development.
swiftly to the future.
swiftly into the future.