Posted by Michele Peters on August 11, 19102 at 13:03:26:
In Reply to: ĦiTopic 115ĦjSome people believe that students should be given one long vacation each year. Others believe that students should have several short vacations throughout the year. Which viewpoint do you agree with? Use specific reasons and examples to support your choice. posted by Naluwan on August 04, 19102 at 09:28:29:
Good start.
Introduce your two other reasons in your introduction.
Your last example: being able to relax several times throughout the year instead of waiting for a longer period to relax should be a new paragraph.
Summarize your reasons in your conclusion.
Some other comments:
: For a student who often gets poor grades on exams. If he can have several short vacations,
: then he can make the most of these time to study hard in order to catch up with other
...grades on exams, having these shorter vacation times throughout the year gives him time to study and catch up...
: several short vacations during one year, they can go travelling to relax themselves.
...they can travel and relax.
Instead of being in this way, I agree to the idea that students need more short vacations throughout the year.
Shorter vacations thoughout the year gives students time to catch up with their studies, make plans, and relax more often.