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Posted by kikita cai on August 15, 19102 at 02:55:04:

In Reply to: Stay Healthy posted by Michele Peters on August 11, 19102 at 11:51:07:

: Your essay is good. You start with a good introduction, give good examples and end with summary of those examples.

: Some other comments:

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: Because diet effectS our health.
: : NowAdays, more and more people are aware of the composition of our daily diet.
: : For instance,they avoid eating the food which high in calorie and cholesterin.
: ...eating foods high in calories and cholestoral.

: density. It also helpS you maintain your posture.

: For instance, a person who getS cancer, but he never feelS sad and be

: Stay with the same person. For example, if you use the third person: a person or he, then use that person throughout. If you use the second person: we, our, or us, then use that person throughout.

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: : Your essay is good. You start with a good introduction, give good examples and end with summary of those examples. : : Some other comments: : : : : Because diet effectS our health. : : : NowAdays, more and more people are aware of the composition of our daily diet. : : : For instance,they avoid eating the food which high in calorie and cholesterin. : : ...eating foods high in calories and cholestoral. : : density. It also helpS you maintain your posture. : : For instance, a person who getS cancer, but he never feelS sad and be : : Stay with the same person. For example, if you use the third person: a person or he, then use that person throughout. If you use the second person: we, our, or us, then use that person throughout.

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