Dr Mr Lougheed! Can you give the comments on my essay: Give reasons for the change that you find the most important one in the 20th century


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Posted by smiling sun on August 24, 19102 at 01:02:51:

There were many important changes in the 20th century. But that one stood out of the rest was the development of Internet technology. Internet technology has brought to the human being both economic and social benefits. Therefore, Internet is the most important change for me.

As Internet is a technology that allows individuals computers to connect with each other over the world, information sharing and communicating have become more easier.

Internet is like a large library from which people can access and exploit any information they needed. This kind of electronic library consists of many informative web sites in all fields such as society, economy, culture and politics. Internet is a really useful tool for the purpose of reasching and studying.

Internet is a fast and economical mean of communication. Just by clicking on “Send”, one person can send e-mail to his/her friends who live at a very long distance and his/her friends can instantly receive this mail. Moreover, the development of Internet technology nowadays allows us to organise video conference which means that we do not need a physical meeting, participants may sit at various places in the world while the meeting takes place.

One more importane benefit that Internet has brought to the human is the economic development. There is a new kind of busines with the support of Internet, called e-biz. People nowadays can stay at home and go shopping from e-shops. To make payment, they use e-bank’s accounts. Everything is extremely convinient and economica.

I can’t think of any other change that bring us the convinience and usefulness as much as Internet has done for us. We are thankful for the advance of Internet technology.



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