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Posted by Michele Peters on September 03, 19102 at 20:01:18:

In Reply to: qualities of a good neighbor posted by anusha on September 02, 19102 at 23:45:42:

To help the reader follow your essay, you should put a space between each paragraph. Your first paragraph should be your introduction; the second, third and fourth should be dedicated to your examples and reasons for each quality a neighbor should have; and your last paragraph should be your conclusion and restating the three qualities.

Also, review your tenses: a neigbor (singular) or neighbors (plural/more than one).


: Being a human being we prefer to live in community.Attitude of human being makes people to live in communism.There are very rare people who don't like to live in community.The house stand by our house and those people who live in that house called neighbor.Neighbor play important role in our lives..The qualities of good neighbor should include:someone whom we can trust,someone whom we can talk to.and someone with whom we have something in common. While going outdoors or to spend vacation your neighbor can watch over your house if only you have trust on them. If you have lost your key of your house and you need a shelter then the neighbor is the one with whom you can feel comfortable leaving an extra door key with the neighbor? Hence neighbor is the one who helps in your problem.For thiss we people also be well behaved with our neighbor and always ready to help them indeed.Becaause there is a saying that" what we grow, we harvest".This way relaationship between two neighbor become pleasant.they think other's problem as their own.And thiss trustness brings you a confidence that your neighbor won't steal from you. Neighbor play important role in our daily life.If someday you feel bored sitting alone in your house then the neighbor might give you a company.You can have talk with them.If we are in trouble then firstly we remember our neighbor for help.If we'r friendly with our neighbor then they too will cooperate us.We can easily share our feelings and opinions wwith ourr neighbor. For this we can have small talk about our families or something else like weather.Or about jobs. According to our attitude what people use to do is they wish their neighbor of same caategory means having something common in both of them.I also thik it is better to have something common for ex,Neighbor of similar age;so thinking of one can match another.Generation gap should not be there. Two unknown people having same interest and hobbies and having job in the same office and we come to know that they lives near our house.Then no time the two will become a good neighbor. Hobbies of doing gardening and interests in sportss of two neighbor become very near to each other. As a whole people who live next to our door is our neighbor should have some qualities like get along well; they should trust each other; talk to one another and something in common.




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