Posted by Michele Peters on September 03, 19102 at 20:08:36:
In Reply to: Study group v/s study alone. posted by kishu on September 02, 19102 at 23:35:51:
To make it easier for the reader to follow, separate your paragraphs with a space.
In your first introductory paragraph, introduce your preference (which you do) but also your reasons.
Restate your reasons in your last/ concluding paragraph.
Some other comments:
in which we were absents
...absent
more perfection.
more perfect OR more accurate
the mistake answer in my copy and due
..incorrect answer...
least than I had
..lower than...
By studying in-group also help us to recover the lecture
Studying in a group also helps us....