Posted by Lin Lougheed on August 06, 19101 at 17:03:46:
In Reply to: Some people prefer to live in a small town. Others prefer to live in a big city. Which place would you prefer to live in ?Use specific reasons and details to support your answer. posted by Sudeshna Aich on August 02, 19101 at 13:24:46:
You stated your main ideas and followed with good supporting details.
A few comments:
You have many sentence fragments in your essay. Reread your essay and correct them.
Which helps making these researches a success.
"This helps make my research successful."
Avoid starting a sentence with :And
And I am certain that it would not have been
libraries filled with latest books and journals and they give you access to computers and you can reach to all kind of knowlege database through internet.
"libraries filled with the latest books and journals and with access to computers. Through the Internet, I can search all kinds of databases."