Posted by Michele Peters on September 22, 19102 at 11:44:24:
In Reply to: A company is going to give some money either to supports the arts or to protect the environment. Which do you think the company should choose? posted by Supachet on September 20, 19102 at 07:58:22:
Your essay is well thought out and well structured. You provide good arguments for your position.
Some comments:
You should avoid using contractions in a formal essay:
Currenly, you can’t reject that there
Nowadays, you cannot deny...
Although, you stay at home, you can
Even when you ....