Posted by Michele Peters on September 22, 19102 at 14:02:39:
In Reply to: Think of the most interesting class you have ever taken. Why did you enjoy this class so much? Use specific reasons and details to explain your answer. posted by Simon on September 17, 19102 at 15:56:07:
Your essay is well structured and well thought out. Restate your reasons in your last concluding paragraph.
Physics is your favorite class because it's interesting, you do well in it, and it fosters collaboration.
Some other comments:
: Compare to any other classes I have
Compared
taken during my school history, I feel no one class could give me so many joys than the physics class could do.
..as much joy as physics class does.
: When I was in my middle school, it was a great thing when I know that
...a great thing to know...
Cause I could enjoy another interesting
Because
Rather than other classes, like
Unlike other courses,
sitting in the class room hearing
hearing should be listening
During these experiments, I established my science-relative interests, which give me a great benefit in my study in the university.
....science-related interests, which benefit (or benefitted if in the past) me in my university studies.
I believe none class else can inspire me so far to pursue a scientific result.
...no other class can inspire me as much....
collaborate with other students. I
...collaboration...
They give me a
...gave
: As those reasons I have talked above,
For those reasons...I conclude