Posted by Michele Peters on September 22, 19102 at 14:50:40:
In Reply to: Topic 76 posted by Bruno de Saxce on September 02, 19102 at 21:56:32:
Good start. Review the structure and organization of your essay.
You are asked to choose the characteristics you feel are important to being successful. Choose three and explain why you chose them. Each should be a separate paragraph.
Restate the three characteristics in your conclusion.
Other comments:
opinion is the sensitivity. With the
the sensitivity should be sensitivity (no "the" needed)
No one know everything
No one knows
you. Finally, the thing may help you
Avoid using "thing"; readers may not know what "thing" refers to.