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Posted by Michele Peters on September 29, 19102 at 10:44:13:

In Reply to: ĦiTopic 42ĦjDo you agree or disagree with the following statement? With the help of technology , students nowadays can learn more information and learn it more quickly. Use specific reasons and examples to support your answer. posted by Naluwan on September 23, 19102 at 21:34:35:

Good start.

Give your position in your first paragraph:

Technologies have made learning more enjoyable and easy, and information more accessible.

Each point should be its own paragraph. The last paragraph (conclusion) should restate the points.

Some other comments:

these modern technology
these modern technogies

on a search engine,
into a search engine

: then lots of articles related will represent in front of you. However, in
...present themselves...

the past, students
: can only obtain limited knowledge
..could...

: information on some topics is to go to library.
...was to go to the library.

There is a big difference between internet data
...an internet database and a library.

On internet there are huge amount of up-
On the internet,

to-date information, not like the
: information in the library, are
...unlike the information in the library, is

: we can learn English not only listening
...not only by listening...

improvements will let students to
...will allow students...




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