Posted by Michele Peters on September 29, 19102 at 11:08:20:
In Reply to: A gift(such as a camera, a soccer ball, or an animal) can contribute to a child’s development. What gift would you give to help a child’s develop? Why? posted by Supachet on September 24, 19102 at 05:39:33:
Good start.
Your conclusion should restate your position and reasons. For example:
Books are great gifts because they help you explore, provide useful information, and reading improves concentration.
Some other comments:
: Birthday is one of the most
Our birthday...
mothers give us a life in this day. We
...on this day.
preference
...reference...
reports. It can make your report more perfect. (Something can't be more perfect since perfect is the best something can be.)
References can make your report more accurate.
Avoid using "it" because sometimes readers will not understand what "it" refers to.
In addition, you can apply this for
working, If you concentrate when you
....apply this to your work...
: In short, A present is not only something people give to someone they love but it is something that can make you clever and knowledgeable as well.
...not only...but also