Posted by Chaitanya on October 30, 19102 at 00:04:52:
In Reply to: #6: If you could change one important thing about your hometown what would you change? Use reasons and specific examples to support your answer. posted by Laphijia on October 27, 19102 at 04:58:52:
The examples that you gave to emphasize your choice are good enough to consider your view. But in the process, I think, you are giving less importance to family life. An married person may think the way that you have proposed in your essay, but what about a tired husband/ wife who works the whole day and who longs to meet his family members at night. I think it is better to such perspective as well.