Posted by Lily on February 02, 19103 at 09:28:45:
MY COMPOSITION as follows.
Nowadays, it is commonly believed that the conveniences and luxuries of life are completely harmless. While it may be true in some cases, these facilities and comfort style of life can really prevent people from becoming strong and independent.
Admittedly, human beings have always been looking for the best way of life, and looking forward to a comfortable and convenient life, and even---as to some parts of the people----a luxuries one. In modern society, a convenient and efficient style of life can always give a great deal of advantages. For instance, more and more families leave the household-work to hour-workers (those who are hired to do some simple work in one¡¯s home and, as a result, can get some wage by their labours) rather than doing the boring housework by themselves. Hence, the hosts of the families who hire the hour-workers may have enough time and energy to engage in what they want to do, such as a part-time job, a life-long study, or just an entertainment. Often they think it is economic to live a life in such style.
Unfortunately, however, there always are too many people who become more and more lazy and dependent on others due to the life style of convenience and comfortable, especially when such cozy life conditions are not attained by their own hard work, say, the majority of children who have a rich family background. As a mother, whose child is not very diligent on his lessons, once said: ¡±I am very worried about my son. He never know the hardness of life and he even don¡¯t understand what a honey life he is now living in. I fear that he would become a man who can do nothing useful to his family and the society.¡± It is not only the mothers who are complaining. In fact, more and more people are indulged by the life of a too comfortable or even luxurious one.
In most cases, the luxury life will bring some problems with people¡¯s life. Firstly, if one does not understand the difficulties of life, one would not cherish what he or she has owned. Often enough, he or she become lazy and not likely to work hard for their future, in fact, they even never have thought about the future. Secondly, due to the comfortable life, some people would like to spend their time in oversleeping, overeating and entertaining and recreation as well. Therefore, their health situations are not likely to be good for they tend to ignore exercising and sports.
In sum, although people can always take some advantages of the conveniences or maybe the luxuries of life, we cannot come to the conclusion that such life style will be entirely harmless. And we should notice the bad aspects of this kind of life while enjoying in its positive advantages. (473 words)
Good wishes to you.
Yours,