Posted by Lin Lougheed on August 24, 19101 at 21:54:48:
In Reply to: No.30 posted by Masayuki Adachi on August 15, 19101 at 12:58:03:
You provided good examples for your general theme. You could introduce them in the opening paragraph:
"Recently, people have increased their efforts to protect our earth. As popular as these efforts to protect the eart are, we cannot deny that our environment is being destroyed by carbon emissions and by deforestation."