Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 19, 19101 at 11:03:42:
In Reply to: Topic 17 posted by Julia on September 14, 19101 at 07:31:55:
You clearly stated your opinion and followed with good supporting details.
I agree with you. It is often difficult to find your own mistakes. You need to try.
You have several verbs that do not agree with the subject. Try to find them.
"But as concerns me," "But as far as I'm concerned..."
"I mean experienced and" I mean an experienced and..."
"in dispute with clever people." "when you discuss it with someone knowledgeable."
"To resume my preference" "To restate my preference" or "In conclusion,..."