Posted by Lin Lougheed on September 24, 19101 at 17:35:49:
In Reply to: Topic 15 The qualities of good neighbor posted by Yoshinori Mochida on September 22, 19101 at 05:27:26:
We can easily follow your essay. Three ideas and three supporting examples. Well done. (You might want to put the three qualities in the first paragraph.)
A few suggestions:
"Even though I had a lot of opportunities to talk with him, if he was not friendly, I could not get along with him. Without friendliness, being with the neighbor would not have me relaxed or feel comfortable."
"If I had opportunities to talk to my neighbor, I wouldn't do it if he or she weren't friendly. I wouldn't feel comfortable or relaxed talking to someone who wasn't friendly."