Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 04, 19101 at 11:24:35:
In Reply to: #167 Your school has enough money to purchase either computers for students or books for the library. Which one would you choose to buy - computers or books? Use specific reasons and details to support your recommendation. posted by James Mattison on October 03, 19101 at 05:50:48:
Like Cindy's essay above, I would recommend you end your introduction with the three (or four) points that you plan to discuss: better investment, large quantity; ease of use. Did you have a fourth? Value (worthiness)?
"I will recommend my school ..."
change to:
"I will recommend to my school the purchase of books..."
or "I will recommend that my school purchase..."