Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 22, 19101 at 20:22:15:
In Reply to: Which do you prefer: staying in one place or moving in search of another place? posted by Jose BA on October 15, 19101 at 22:38:31:
You stated your ideas and wrote one paragraph on each of your ideas. Each idea was supported by several details. Congratulations.
You need to carefully revise your grammar. There are many awkward sentences. Read it again, and see if you can keep the same organization, but make the sentences more simple.
Thanks for your effort!