Posted by Lin Lougheed on October 26, 19101 at 18:22:03:
In Reply to: People do many different things to stay healthy. What do you do for good health? posted by Silpngarmlert on October 26, 19101 at 13:10:48:
This essay reads very easily and your ideas are solid. Have one of your friends read it to see if she or he can find one of the few errors in the essay.
Here's one:
having a good health: being in good health
Here's another
keys of healthy: keys to good health.